I am In Room 11 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan

Friday, 28 February 2014

Caring for the planet Earth

Walt : Write an Explanation

Caring for the planet Earth

People should recycle, reuse, reduce instead of littering and killing the animals. People can only take 1% of water because there is 99% of sea water and people can’t drink sea water because it is salty and if the people won’t look after the water, they will get dehydrated.

First throw all the rubbish in the rubbish. After that save the power by turning off the lights to not waste the energy. Lots of People have to plant trees, because the trees clean the air. More people should walk or bike their way to school/work because if they go in their car, their car cause a air pollution.

Some adults help the Ge money plants trees to give more oxygen because if their is no oxygen then you won’t be able to breath. Adults, Children and the community must recycle, reuse and reduce.

First, people recycle because when they recycle the people make cars and other stuff. Next, people reuse so they won’t waste their money on buying water instead of drinking the tap water. Lastly is reduce. Reduce means to make smaller or less in amount, degree, or size.

Lastly people should care about earth. People should never litter and kill the animals in earth.


Etai said...

Kia orana Ifa,
I liked your explanation writing about caring for planet earth. When you did it did you feel lost when you thought about it. When you looked at the book did you know what to do. Keep up the good work Ifa you are doing great in your writing.

Andrea said...
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Andrea said...

Hi Ifa
I really like how you could explain how people can take care of Earth. You used so many interesting words such as dehydration and many others. Did you have to write this story in a limited amount of time? Keep up your good work Ifa. You are doing great.

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