I am In Room 11 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan

Showing posts with label Narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Narrative. Show all posts

Thursday, 30 July 2015

The battle Of The Beast

Walt: write an impactful introduction to our Maori Myth.

“AAAAAH!” yelled Jack. A Taniwha is coming and it's in his water tank to destroy the Sky Tower. It was as windy as a tornado whistling through the building. Jack said, “The Maori wind God is trying to blow the Taniwha away!” The wind God called and he said, “I AM TAWHIRIMATEA.”

The Taniwha was very strong and stomped his way to the Sky Tower. Tawhirimatea huffed and he puffed and he still couldn’t blow him away. The Taniwha Laughed evilly “MWAHAHAHAHA!” He could only feel the wind blowing into his fiery breath. The Taniwha kicked the Sky Tower with his Horse powered legs and the Sky Tower crumbled.

Tawhirimatea huffed and he puffed......... Boom! The Taniwha flew away and went all the way down to Antarctica. The Taniwha was never seen after that. Tawhirimatea’s battle was over. Then the God Tane Mahuta came with all his birds and fixed the Sky Tower.

Jack couldn’t believe his eyes. Jack ran home to grab his camera. His house was three blocks away. When he got back he tried to take a picture of the God. All he saw was birds. It was like bird paradise.  

Jack still has his picture with him. He hangs it on his fridge. Every time he looks at the picture it reminds him of the battle of Tawhirimatea and the Taniwha.

Monday, 19 November 2012

The wrong class

One early terrible Friday morning Sam came in a car to school with his friends Ben and Tane. Sam’s mum dropped them off to school. Sam, Ben and Tane were best friends.
The bell rang for morning tea Sam, Ben and Tane were hungry.

Then suddenly Sam’s bag got lost along with his sandwiches.  
His friends said “are you going to eat your lunch.”
Sam said "no."
Ben and Tane said "why?"
Sam said “because I lost my bag.”
Ben said “where did you put it last?"
Sam said “I don’t know.”
Then Tane said “why don’t you know where you put your bag?" he screamed.
Sam started crying and said “why are you screaming at me?"

Two minutes later he found out where his bag was. He found out that he was in the wrong class. Ben and Tane are in Room 8 but Sam is in Room 9. Sam had put his bag in Room 9.

Tane said "next time remember to come to the right class because you will get hungry and start crying."

Tuesday, 6 November 2012

The Birds Outside Room9

From Auckland the birds would fly from our country to another country every time the weather changes from Summer to Winter and Winter to Summer.  Today the birds came to Glen Innes School because  they wanted to  lay eggs and making nests.

A fierce, scary bird came to school. It was an Hast Eagle, a dangerous bird predator,  and it looked very hungry and wanted to hunt its prey. All the birds stopped moving and tried to stand as still as a statue. Then the Hast Eagle looked at little sparrow very closely in the eye. The Sparrow was going to fly away but then it fainted, because the Hast eagle is so scary and big. Then a Sea Eagle came. It was yaping so much I think it could rap.  “Yummy food for me,” thought the Hast eagle.  Then the hast eagle flew up and it came down very fast like a meteor, it opened it’s mouth very wide, ready to eat the Sea Eagle. The Hast eagle with its brown wings, yellow beak, black claws and a black and yellow eye was almost on the Sea Eagle..

Then Sam came and had something delicious for the Hast eagle. It was something to make it sleep  but it smelled yummy. The bird came down very slowly and took one bite and the Hast eagle went to sleep. Sam took the Hast Eagle to the zoo.