In this game you had to put where the commas are supposed to go. It was very easy for me. I only got one wrong. I am happy with my score. I think if I played this game again I would try to get all right. The next thing I’d like to learn is how to use good punctuation.
I am a Year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Mr Ramkolowan.
Thursday, 25 June 2015
Wednesday, 24 June 2015
Jack's Goal
Walt: Write a descriptive text.
“Zoom!”. a ball just went in the air. Jack’s kick went through the other players. It skimmed one of the players hair and just went right through the goalkeeper's hands. It was as fast as a car speeding on a open road. The opponents were so scared, they couldn't even touch it.
Jack was celebrating his goal. Jack was hopping on one foot in a circle. He was fist pumping his hands in the air one by one. His team was rushing to him and jumping on his back. He did a backflip and ran up and down the field. He was walking like there was something in his left pocket. He screamed as loud as a lion’s roar.
The game was tied, Jack and the opposing team was tired too. They couldn’t breathe. Jack felt like he had asthma from running and chasing the ball. Both teams felt like they were unfit. Some of the players waited for a little bit then started playing.
After three minutes Jack’s teammate stole the ball. He ran and passed it to Jack. Jack kicked it and it hit the goalkeeper’s head. The goalkeeper laughed and then suddenly he saw the ball rolling into the goal area. Jack couldn't believe it.
Another goal, another win. That was the last game of the season.
Thursday, 11 June 2015
Tuesday, 9 June 2015
Jump Rope for Heart
On the 19th of June, we are going to G.I center to fundraise for the Jump Rope for Heart. On this day we were showing everyone what we are doing when we go to the Glen Innes Center. This was only a practise. We do this to keep the G.I community fit and not obesity.
Friday, 5 June 2015
Thursday, 4 June 2015
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